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Friday, 19 February 2016
The Apple
2 comments:
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Reflection I found it tricky to find the information because there were no words. I am proud that I managed to complete my work. Next I will try this with a longer book and use my powers of observation.
Well done Olivia, with your fabulous story. I thought you followed the direction to use your brainstorm of what you could see in the picture and adding some dialogue as well. Tino pai. Next time I would like you to work on your sentences making sense, as we worked on this together before you published your slideshow.
2 comments:
Reflection
I found it tricky to find the information because there were no words.
I am proud that I managed to complete my work. Next I will try this with a longer book and use my powers of observation.
Well done Olivia, with your fabulous story. I thought you followed the direction to use your brainstorm of what you could see in the picture and adding some dialogue as well. Tino pai. Next time I would like you to work on your sentences making sense, as we worked on this together before you published your slideshow.
Miss H
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